Because Alfonso untangles Frankie from the fence, Alfonso meets Frankie's sister, Sandra (who he eventually goes on a date with). If Alfonso hadn't stopped his bike to help Frankie and Sandra, there would have been no premise for this story. So, this action drives the rest of the plot forward.
The text may be better structured to aid the reader’s understanding by placing the information in a bullet list. (Option B).
<h3>What is a bullet list?</h3>
A bullet list is a list of items or things each highlighted with a symbol rather than number. An example of the text in bullet list is:
Being a keen traveler, I have visited some of the major cities in Asia:
- Kyoto, Japan, where I ate sushi for the first time;
- Shanghai, China, where I went up the Oriental Pearl Tower;
- Bangkok, Thailand, where I watched a martial arts tournament; and
- Bali, Indonesia, where I learned to surf.
Learn more about bullet lists at:
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If I like it: Yes, I like this poem. It seems/feels so intimate, yet somehow I feel connected to the character.
What emotions are there:I believe the emotions a reader would feel would be sorrow, pity, despair, grief, and helplessness because he/she has no power to help the abused.
What I would add to make it better: I probably wouldn't, perhaps start posting it publicly to sites like 'Wattpad', to get a wider perspective from public comments.
I believe it’s the second one
