in poetry, the volta, or turn, is a rhetorical shift or dramatic change in thought and/or emotion. Turns are seen in all types of written poetry.
I think that this is a very good opening paragraph. I can clearly tell exactly what your writing piece will be about, and it definitely hooks me in as a reader... GOOD JOB!
To me, it is because a wide range of people can post their opinions, views, lives and any personal opinion with anyone they'd like. Also it is a source for entertainment and a connection with friends and family.
Crossing- present participle
Crossing the street is dangerous and illegal- phrase?
