I think there is a shift at “...assured him”. From reading the beginning, you would think the person is under arrest, “stay where you are”. But, the sentence goes on to say that the police officer ‘assured’ him that. He could’ve been in danger, so the officer was telling him that help was on the way, just stay put.
Why not look for examples on the Internet and try to do it on your own? Still, I know how hard it is to come up with something on your own when you are writers blocked.
I think this would be repetition:
I remember:
I remember the day I meet you
You were beautiful, I admit
I remember the times you caressed me
You meant everything to me
I remember you today
You will always be in my heart
I remember you always
You will never leave my memories
This would be using simile and metaphor:
Breakup
Breakup is a terrible feeling
It's like a burning fire which crumbles your heart into ashes
It's like a black hole you are being consumed into
Breakup is a terrible though
Breakup is a terrible enemy
It's like a war you are to face
It's a heavy rock you are to carry
Break is a terrible thing
These are my original poems using my own words. I hope this helped!!! :)
Me and Maria went to the ice cream shop we then headed back
That he can be more than what people expect him from
