There are 2 dreadful oracles that would fall to King
Acrisius. First is that he shall have no sons. Secondly, his grandson Perseus, son
of Danae, would be the cause of his death. Perseus killed King Acrisius when he
participated in the funeral games and accidentally striked Acrisius’ head with
a dicus.
Schaffer mistakenly told his assistant to strike alarm Box 342, and as a result, firefighters were directed to an incorrect location during the Chicago fire of 1871.
This is the best example of adding concrete details. It specifically says which alarm box Schaffer told his assistant. The original sentence makes it seem as the miscommunication was the big problem. While it was a problem, the fact that the firefighters went to the incorrect location is really the reason the Chicago fire of 1871 was so devastating. Including these details makes the writing much clearer and easier for the reader to follow.
Well i reckon (see what i did there) it was because he kept causing trouble and made the kidnappers angry and kinda scared of him... in a way. they didnt want to deal with him anymore so they just gave him back
Caesr escaped and he was born in 100 with a wealthy family
