editing
The editing stage of the writing process is when the writer typically reads each words of a draft aloud and listens for stylistic, grammatical, and other errors. At this point the writer has created a complete draft of the composition. While there have been some edits during the draft process, during this stage the writer focuses solely on editing the composition for any errors. The other stages of the writing process are brainstorming, outlining, drafting and publishing.
Here we can observe that the verb used doesn't reflect the correct tense to express when this action took/is taking/will take place. There are many tenses where you could choose from, depending of the time of action:
Tenses: Simple, Progressive, Perfect, Perfect progressive
Times: Past, Present, and Future
Imagine all the combinations!
The simplest example we could make is if this action is a routine that happens continuously, the action verb (invite) is changed to simple present for the third person of singular (invites):
<span>Tommy, in an effort to maintain clowning's positive roots, invites dancers to weekly performance battles.</span>
The most logical way to sequence these sentences to create a logical narrative is this:
- Sentence 2: I decided to ride my skateboard to school this morning.
- Sentence 1: As I turned onto Bryce Road, I saw the Parkers’ cat crouched under a tree, hissing at something on the ground.
- Sentence 4: Approaching the cat, I noticed that a nest full of tiny birds was on the ground; it must have fallen from a branch.
- Sentence 3: I shooed the cat away and called my older stepbrother, a veterinarian because he would know just how to help them.
<h3 /><h3>What is a Logical Sequence?</h3>
In simple terms, a logical sequence refers to a text that flows in a smooth manner. The manner in which the events make sense and are thus relatable.
In the above text, the events have been arranged in a manner that will make meaning to any reader.
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