Written sentence has a formal style and tone.
I think the reason why the summary need to be revised is : C. the summary lacks transitions that connect ideas
For example, we need to add transition between -enkai wanted to save his cattle- and -He grew a tree that bridged the sky and the earth-
I just took the test or question thing and B and D are correct.
Answer:
SUMMARIZE?
Explanation:
Just summarize what you know so far?