Hi. You did not submit the sample that the question refers to, nor did you submit your answer. This makes it impossible for this question to be answered. However, I will try to help you as best I can.
Your question asks you to compare your answer with a model answer. You don't show the context these two answers are related to, so you should look for that context in your paper. It is likely that these answers are related to the previous question.
To make the comparison you should note which elements these questions have similar or equal and how they complement each other. The more similar, the more complementary the two answers are. If the two answers do not complement each other, nor do they have any similar elements, it means that they are completely different.
Answer:
The leading cause of accidents for teenage drivers is using inexperience
Source: https://www.cdc.gov/motorvehiclesafety/teen_drivers/teendrivers_factsheet.html
Explanation:
I want to help you because I know how hard it is to catch up when you are falling behind. To be completely honest I would love to do the whole thing for you but I have my own school work to do as well. I am answering this question in my free time and I am basically going to give you a very detailed and somewhat filled-out outline. I'm also not completely the entire assignment because I find it important that people on here do the majority of their assignments themselves. Also, there are no "informational paragraphs" above.
Answer:
Introduction/Hook:
While several teenagers will make the argument that social media is the greatest thing to ever happen, it has its downsides.
Claim:
Social media has a number of negatives that come with it.
Counterclaim:
Social media may not always be the heart of the younger generation or the thing that makes technology so technological.
Body Paragraph:
For some teens, it boosts their confidence levels but for others, it takes theirs away. It keeps teens on their phones all the time instead of them focusing on in-person activities and interacting with other people.
I'm don't know if this is what you wanted but I hope it helps!
Have a lovely day!
Answer:
OA. I went to look for my watch, but I can never seem to find the time.
Explanation:
A pun is usually a comical play on the actual statement itself. There usually two elements that are inter connected to each other in some way.
Let's look at A: watch and time correlate since a watch tells time. The statement is ironic the speaker doesn't have his watch, therefore figuratively but maybe actually as well "doesn't have the time". It's therefore a pun.
B: It's a different figurative language technique, but I'm not sure what it is. 100% sure it's not a pun though.
C: it's a metaphor. It's a comparison between two things, in this case the novel was so well explained it had he accuracy of hitting a nail directly on the head.
D: That's just a statement, maybe a poetic quote.
It helps to solve the conflict because Rachel’s family is closer to having a safe place to live
