What are u looking for exactly? Punctuation? if so the answer to all are exclamation points (!)
Answer:
The first one uses adventure appeal to try and get the reader to imagine themselves on an adventure with this "super awesome camera"
The second one uses a statistics appeal, they are telling the reader "here is why our product is better than other people's" and "here's what percent of people liked our product so you will too"
Explanation:
Hope this helps a little!
While looking through the magazine i saw this beautiful woman, in a red silky dress, with beautiful blond hair and gorgeous green eyes, she was sitting on a dark brown chair with her legs crossed and her hands in her lap, with dark purple nails. While she was sitting she had the most beautiful smile that anyone has ever seen. And she had dark mid-night colored high-heels with rhinestones on them. Her hair was half up half down with braids going down the side of her head leading on to her long silky hair and her hair was curled in the prettyist way. She looked so elegant like a Queen.
