Question

A furry is someone who likes to draw anthropomorphic animals, sometimes a furry will make a mascot/costume or in other words fur-suit, of there fursona; your original anthropomorphic character you created, what do furry's do? They draw/animate there character or characters, have fun and dance in there fur-suit and sometimes even sing. A furry can even make tons of money selling art and fur-suit's. you don't even have to draw to be a furry either, you can just like animal characters. but whats a problem in this hobby, adults have ruined this hobby because of many reasons such as things related to sex, creeps, and even more down right nasty stuff, if furry's can find a way to get rid of these people the fandom/hobby can be much more peaceful.
(I need you to rate my work before submit it to my school teacher)

thank you all!

Answer 1

There are some minor things that would improve it.

For example.

But adults have ruined this hobby. They have associated furry's with sex, creeps, and even worse things. If furry's can find a way to change peoples minds than people can start to enjoy these loveable characters again.

Answer 2

Answer:

It's actually really good I agree with the other person too!

Explanation: