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I love going to the zoo with my dad. Many of the animals are cool and we like looking at animals especially lions. <u>because</u> (lions are big and strong and strong animals are scary) (Change : They are tough and ferocious, which makes them scary)<u> </u><u>in real life</u> but when they are in a cage it isn't so bad. <u>but</u> I would never want to be put in a cage because I would get sad. <u>so</u> (I don't know if the animals are happy or sad but) (change : Uncertain if the animals will feel happy or sad themselves) my dad (says)(change : said) that the animals at the zoo are very well taken care of and i shouldn't worry about them.
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I added brackets to the parts where i changed the sentenced, underlined the parts I would cross out and bold the periods.
Where it says change : don't add that in the sentence.
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You make sure your reader understands. state most important information in it. Follow along with the dialogue so they know what P.O.V you are in
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This all helps them find what your story means
Answer: A verb's tense shows the time when the action is completed. The tense of the verb is used for the indication of the time to revel the time of completion of the action. The action can occur mainly in three forms of tenses including past, present, and the future tense according to the statement of the sentence.F
Explanation: What can I say exepct get nae naed
In gothic work, one commonly encounters supernatural events.
