Answer:
I dont know what story this is from, but ill guess the 4th one!
Explanation:
In the statement it says nothing about glasses, microscope, or a rock!
Pls show the whole text with the sentence so I can have a better answer!
C should be the answer. A doesn't help you organize information, because it's "random" labeling. B includes paragraphs, which you usually don't construct in an outline bc outlines are brief. for D, it's a research paper and one can assume that all information is fairly relevant and important, plus color coding isn't a typical part of an outline. E says to list it alphabetically but that doesn't help you organize your information either because you don't necessarily want your research papers to be alphabetical, you want them to follow a logical path.
Hello!
I don't find the paragraph to be too wordy at all. I don't understand the entire context of the paragraph, only because I don't know the topic that it is written on. Despite this, I was still able to follow the meaning of the paragraph.
Something that I did notice is that you have one run-on sentence in your paragraph. You wrote "The only thing they solved was why Hope was in that picture, she photobombed a family picture, they gave her the printed version because they deleted the original and didn't want her in it, she cut the family out and wrote on the back, 'Don't go to the subway.'"
Instead, you could reword it into multiple different sentences to make the idea complete. I would recommend you turn this section into: "The only thing they solved was why Hope was in that picture. She photobombed a family picture and they gave her the printed version because they deleted the original one and didn't want her in it. She cut the family out and wrote on the back, 'Don't go to the subway.'"
I hope this helps you! Have a lovely day!
- Mal
The sirens would show themselves as beautiful mermaids, and they would sing of the sailors' greatest desires and offer them their greatest desires.
Of the desert is the prepositional phrase
