I am not 100% sure because I haven't read the book yet but I do have a downloaded one and I found this....I am not sure if it will work but it just may, it is where he is fighting Grendel the troll I think he is and Beowulf says "I am ripper, tearer, slasher, gouger. I am the teeth in the darkness, the talons in the night. Mine is strength and lust and power! I am Beowulf! " And yes I did copy/paste this from my PDF book. Also help I can't turn off bold letters! xD
This paragraph is super... choppy. It needs to be more fluid. Also, the hook is, well, not present. They have a good start with "Growing flowers is one of my happiest childhood memories." You should build more on this idea of why gardening makes you happy. Through these memories you could share what you gain from gardening, and why you should stop thinking just about the time it takes but also the profit you can earn. To get rid of this "choppiness" you connect through the memories.
Hope this helps!
If you mean a rough draft, it’s to see how the final will come out and to fix any grammatical errors, along with practicing writing for future work.
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Explanation: Nominative and Objective
For example, in the sentence, "The dog ran," "dog" is the nominative because it's the performer of the verb "ran." An objective refers to a recipient or object of a verb or preposition
