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2. -I'm hungry.-<u> eat</u> your sandwich, then.
3. You're in a hospital.<u> Don't talk</u> loudly.
4.-I think that I'm lost.- <u>Ask</u> for directions, then.
5. Jacob can't solve this problem. <u>Help </u>him, please!
6.It's hot today. <u>Don't take</u> your jacket with you, Lucy.
7.<u>Look</u> at this picture, kids. What can you see?
8. <u>Don't throw </u>rubbish on the street, Pete. We must protect our environment.
Explanation:
We use the imperative form to give orders, instructions, or to warn someone about something. To write sentences in the imperative form, we have to write the verb in the infinitive, and if it is a negative command, we have to write the do not or don't and the verb in the infinitive.
For example, if we want to give an instruction, we can say -Turn on the right- the verb is in the infinite form, the subject may or may not be present since the person can deduce to whom we are saying the command. An example of a sentence where we use the negative form can be - Don't run in the hallways- In this case, we use the auxiliary verb do and the auxiliary not followed by the verb.
Your ideas, what you want to talk about in your story.
General structure of your story.
I think maybe, the issue is the lack of emotional resonance, and the use of terms like “or anything”. Younger people tend to use these terms, and have less power in the emotional realm, at least when it comes to expressing themselves. So, maybe try lessening the terms that are flounce-y and deepen the emotional aspect of this essay, possibly? Just suggestions from an outside eye, good luck!