1answer.
Ask question
Login Signup
Ask question
All categories
  • English
  • Mathematics
  • Social Studies
  • Business
  • History
  • Health
  • Geography
  • Biology
  • Physics
  • Chemistry
  • Computers and Technology
  • Arts
  • World Languages
  • Spanish
  • French
  • German
  • Advanced Placement (AP)
  • SAT
  • Medicine
  • Law
  • Engineering
Blababa [14]
2 years ago
8

I’m writing a story and I want to know what you think. This is what I have so far. Sorry it’s long, but if you have time please

read it and give me honest feedback. Feel free to leave any suggestions below. :)
“ “Two coffees please” It’s Sunday morning and I’m going through the drive through of my favorite coffee place. This is pretty much a daily routine, I always have to grab two coffees. One for me and one for my best friend Ava. Today is my last day of freedom before school starts tomorrow. I am not excited at all. Tomorrow will start my sophomore year of college. The lady at the window hands me my drinks and off I go. I’m driving down the road and suddenly someone walks right out into the street. I slam on my breaks and the coffee spills everywhere. Great. There is no way this person is getting away with this. I park the car on the side of the street and run up to the guy. He doesn’t even acknowledge me. Fine, he wants to play that game? “Hello! Watch it!” I scream at him. He looks over at me and says, “Sorry sunflower, I’m not interested. And are you aware that you have coffee all over your clothes?” What? I’m just going to ignore the coffee comment. “Do not call me sunflower! And trust me, I’m not into guys like you.” He glares at me. “Guys like me?” “You know annoying, arrogant guys who think everything revolves around them.” He ignores my sassy comment and askes, “What do you want?” I smile knowing that I clearly won our little trash talk battle. “What do I want? Excuse me, you just ran in front of my car and made me spill my coffee!” “You’re excused sunflower” Ugh! This guy is getting on my nerves! “Aren’t you going to apologize for running in front of me?” I already know the answer, but I am not leaving until he pays for my coffee. Trust me, he’s paying. He looks at me again, this time I actually get a good look at him. He is very tall with black hair and bright green eyes. He’d definitely be cute if it weren’t for that awful attitude. Finally he says, “Why would I apologize, it ain’t my fault you spilled coffee, that’s called clumsiness sunflower.” What is his problem? “What’s with your obsession with sunflowers?” I ask him. He gives me a death stare. If looks could kill, I’d be dead right now. I definitely made him mad. Mission accomplished. He stares at me for a minute before I finally say, “Ok well if you aren’t going to say anything, I will. Give me your wallet.” He starts laughing, now it’s my turn to give the death stare. “Why in the world would I give you my wallet?” “You spilled my coffee and I’m not paying for more so come on. I need five bucks dude.” He stands there with an angry look on his face for the longest time. Finally, he pulls out his wallet and hands me five bucks. Wow, I thought I’d have to argue with him more. I take the money and say, “Why thank you.” He glares at me once again. I’m starting to think this dude doesn’t know how to smile. “Don’t think I actually like you sunflower, I only gave you that to make you go away.” This sunflower nickname is getting super annoying, good thing I’ll never have to see him again after this. I reply, “Whatever pretty boy.” I turn around and walk back to my car. I didn’t turn back to look at him, but I can feel he hates the fact that I just called him pretty boy. Good. It’s as stupid as the name sunflower. I get into my car and drive away. As I drive by I glance over at pretty boy once more. You guessed it, he’s still standing there with his classic angry glare.”
English
2 answers:
ira [324]2 years ago
8 0

Answer:

I think for starters its pretty good.

Explanation:

If you write more, I would love to read if you add on to this. Would love to see where thia goes!

Alex Ar [27]2 years ago
8 0

Answer:

ik you posted this a while ago but I just read it and really like it.

Explanation:

im about to go read this on wattpad!

You might be interested in
The race through the desert was; it was too long and hot, and my shoes were too tight.
monitta

For this question, we are supposed to choose a word that means "difficult" to complete the sentence and, in this case, the best option would be "grueling".

<h3>How to complete the sentence?</h3>

To complete the sentence provided in the question, we must take the context provided into consideration. According to the speaker, there was a race through the desert. It was an extremely difficult and tiring one, since it was long and hot and the speaker's shoes were too tight.

Taking the answer choices into consideration, the best option is the first one, "grueling." The adjective "grueling" is used to describe something that is extremely demanding and tiring. That is precisely what the speaker is trying to say about the race.

With the information above in mind, we can choose "grueling" as the correct way to complete the sentence.

The answer choices are:

  • Grueling
  • Challenging
  • Problematic
  • Exhausting

Learn more about completing sentences here:

brainly.com/question/14021434

#SPJ1

6 0
2 years ago
what is a character trait that describes a person that wakes up early to start the training even if the coach said to come in at
Butoxors [25]

hard working and dedicated.

7 0
3 years ago
Read 2 more answers
What word best describes the relationship between Buck and John Thornton?
Zina [86]
I'd say C. Love :)
All though they all seem right, It's C.
3 0
3 years ago
Which word best describes the tone of this excerpt?
fomenos
Hopeful.

Why because Enthusiastic can be describe as eager or enjoyment, interest or approval.
5 0
3 years ago
The tone of "at the Tourist Centre in Boston" can be described as_____
SashulF [63]
The question is asking to choose among the choices that states the tone of the "at the tourist centre in boston" and base on my further research and understanding, the answer among the following choices is letter B. disapproving. I hope you are satisfied with my answer and feel free to ask for more 
4 0
3 years ago
Other questions:
  • Read the following passage and highlight all of the verbs.
    9·1 answer
  • Write an essay on how television could be improved 100-120 words.
    6·1 answer
  • Which of these sentences gives the best description of the American identity?
    14·1 answer
  • The main purpose of the passage is to emphasize the value of a tradition. A) B) stress the urgency of an issue. C) highlight the
    8·1 answer
  • Joy will be found in heaven over the sinner who repents.<br> True<br> False
    6·2 answers
  • Which best describes the purpose of the imagery in the excerpt
    7·2 answers
  • 2. A verbal that functions as a noun in a sentence and ends in -ing is a(n)
    11·1 answer
  • Essay<br>Why you decided to enrol fot the Higher certificate in your education<br>​
    9·1 answer
  • 30 verbos regulares en ingles​
    15·1 answer
  • Determine which four events form a clear summary of the passage and place them in the correct order. from robinson crusoe
    13·1 answer
Add answer
Login
Not registered? Fast signup
Signup
Login Signup
Ask question!