The dark clouds gave me a glimpse that it was going to rain. It rained so hard. There was so much puddles when I was walking. Rain is such a soothing sound it makes me feel very calm. Also I don’t really like rain when I’m out because I hate the feeling of getting wet when I have clothes on. When I was out there was so much people carrying umbrellas.
The error is a mistake in tenses. Turning is a present tense while was is a past tense...If you wanted to correct this, you might say...
As I turned the corner, the post office was on my right.
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