A lot of descriptive imagery, excellent setting and sophisticated language. Use of punctuation is varied and concise which effectively engages the readers to continue reading.
One problem is sentence length. No examiner wants to mark your exam and immediately get hit in the face with a chunk of words. Separate your paragraphs individually.
Answer:
Not A cuz it just tells that there was a gift
Not B cuz it's Sean (the receiver) who feels good, not the giver (Logan)
Not C cuz it just explains how Logan afforded it
Explanation:
D. Logan smiled as Sean leaped from his chair to give him a huge hug!
The theme is GIVING a gift to someone you love can make YOU feel good. This means the giver should feel good, or happy, therefore D. is correct.
Answer:
A cesspool can stop working either because it is clogged/backed up or workers are working on it
Explanation:
When grouping ideas in an outline, it is important to remember to follow a pattern. You might group them according to concepts, in chronological order, in order of importance, etc. However, you need to make sure your ideas are coherent and they respect certain concepts. if not, when you start writing it would be difficult to organize a clear assay.
