It felt like everything had turned to slow motion. Before I knew it I ran away from my parents not knowing where to turn to. My thoughts were jumbled I couldn't think straight. I noticed a puddle a flashback hit me suddenly. I couldn't escape it. I heard laughter of my brothers and my mom say watch for that puddle there. We jumped in the puddle but our mother just laughed knowing we would do the opposite. The thought ended so quickly before I knew it I was jumping in the puddle like a child but I did not care. Then I walked and walked but I couldn't push that memory away. Not only did I walk away from my mother I walked away from my sibling. I saw their tears as I walked out of the house. I heard my mother scream, "Please don't leave me!". I seemed not to care at that moment. Then more memories came and I knew I made a mistake. I walked home and realized I had a family that cared about me why should I leave this. My little sis said something so sweet to me and I was speechless. She never really talked but she said, "My Drake you back for good what would I do without you. You mean everything to me I love you." I was a man a strong one but this time I let the tears come as I embraced in a family group hug. I would never forget this day and this very moment of change.
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It felt like everything turned into slow motion after I tried to reach for that darn balloon. I remember I was having a good time listing to music drinking my Sprite that my mother gave me during our picnic outside today around 3:00 pm. Later on all of the sudden I start feeling nothing in my left arm. The ballon goes flying and I try to chase it and try catching it when all of the sudden I feel my world is becoming slower in my eyes and my eyesight starts to get dark and that’s when I hit the floor straight to the puddle where I once felt the water drops on my feet.
The opening hook of a tale must be good enough to entice the reader and keep them reading. However, engaging characters and captivating incidents interspersed in the plot are needed to maintain the reader's attention.
