Please tell me what you think about my story and any feedback on it!!!

English

2 answers:

vampirchik [111]3 years ago

8 0

Answer:

okay, its a good storyline. I did notice that in the beginning when you start talking about the twins you said "they WERE the most down to earth people I KNOW." So, thats two different tenses I would just switch the Know to knew. since you seem to be telling the story from the future perspective. But other than that I really enjoyed reading it, and thought it was pretty good.

Explanation:

makkiz [27]3 years ago

7 0

Answer:

I think it's an AMAZING story. You just need to fix some grammatical problems in the 2nd paragraph. Also, it would be great if you made a part two or something. (I want to know the backstory on what happened to Sasha.) Thank you for making an interesting story and for not using a overused ending. Good Luck with editing!

You might be interested in

Read the passage.

slega [8]

Answer:

the answer is Landfills cause people to breathe in contaminated air. please mark brainliest

7 0

3 years ago

Read 2 more answers

Can you plzzzzzzzzzzzz help me

iragen [17]

Answer:1.sub 2.cond 3.sub 4. Cond 5. Cond 6. Cond

Explanation:Hope this helps

4 0

3 years ago

Read 2 more answers

How is symbolism used in literature? A. To show a feeling of belonging to a specific group or culture B. To show the word choice

Ulleksa [173]

C.) to show objects that represent ideas beyond their literal meaning

7 0

4 years ago

Just tryna multi-task. Having someone do one part of the assignment while i do the other. Who want to help me out?

mariarad [96]

Answer:

i did this before its green trust

6 0

3 years ago

Match the italicized subordinating conjunction to the relationship it demonstrates. 1. I went back to the dealer where I bought

nikklg [1K]

The answer is:

where: Place.
as soon as: Time.
because: Reason.
If: Condition.
so (that): Purpose.
than: Comparison.

Subordinating conjunctions join two clauses, a main one (or independent clause, which can stand on its own) and a subordinate clause (or dependent, which does not indicate a complete thought on its own). They also provide a trasition between the two clauses in order to express time, place, or cause and effect.

3 0

3 years ago