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lana [24]
3 years ago
10

Please tell me what you think about my story and any feedback on it!!!

English
2 answers:
vampirchik [111]3 years ago
8 0

Answer:

okay, its a good storyline. I did notice that in the beginning when you start talking about the twins you said "they WERE the most down to earth people I KNOW." So, thats two different tenses I would just switch the Know to knew. since you seem to be telling the story from the future perspective. But other than that I really enjoyed reading it, and thought it was pretty good.

Explanation:

makkiz [27]3 years ago
7 0

Answer:

I think it's an AMAZING story. You just need to fix some grammatical problems in the 2nd paragraph. Also, it would be great if you made a part two or something. (I want to know the backstory on what happened to Sasha.) Thank you for making an interesting story and for not using a overused ending. Good Luck with editing!

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