You should underline <u>The Bluest Eye</u> and other book titles instead of putting a quotation. Also, I think your last sentence is incomplete. You also need to put some commas in long sentences to prevent a run-on sentence.
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Answer:
I'm a bit confused but I think that the sentence is fine.
Explanation:
Brazil is home to more than 900,000 indigenous people, indigenous people are the country's original inhabitants
the travelers and the llamas are connected. "Knitting their cheeks" is figurative language implying that the people and llamas are analyzing the travelers' movement and displacement from the scene. Knitting refers to the close scrutiny of the travelers and the gaze weaving and intertwining their narratives.
