You have no text for us to read. :(
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They should take away the words "these people". This phrase sounds rather informal.
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Aunt Harriet did not kill herself or the baby, though it does seem like it at first. If you read the pages carefully, Joseph Strorm kills her actually. In the pages after Harriet leaves, David's mom says she will pray for gods forgiveness for Harriet, but J.strorm talks about the heresies of women, how they can get away with it but he says how aunt Harriet won't get away with it this time. The page after, David says how they found aunt Harriet's body in a river, his dad mentioned her in his prayers but never again. This implies murder.
As a youngster, he also saw the difference in men and women
in the workplace.<span> <span>His ideas of women were ladies
who sat around the house reading, tidying up and running errands. To him this
was a life of luxury. But as Sander's said, "I was slow to understand the
deep grievances of women" (Sanders 516). He idolized them, though they
suffered as men suffered when money was tight, it wasn't their fault or
responsibility. </span></span>
