Hi! i would love to help but what novel is this?
The private sector can play a role in poverty alleviation by primarily offering jobs to people out of work ie by providing employment directly in the company or indirectly in associated industries that get business from the enterprise in question which may be supplier or a contractor for say the principal mining business.
I was only able to find 1 pronoun shift.
Teenagers often want more freedom, but you need to show that you are responsible.
