From what I see all of the names are not capitalized so all of them seem to have the capitalization error
Answer:
David, My younger brother lives in Alberts, Canada.
Explanation:
Suspense gets readers not only physically but also emotionally invested in the characters by anticipating what they story, and in turn the characters', outcomes might be. Dialogue also works to thicken plot by implying actions that will take place later in a story.
