He gets a flashback to the last time he saw his parents because he is remembering what life used to be.
Not sure about #1
2: study
3: can
4: were
not sure about #5
not sure about #6
7: apologizes
I am not quit sure what your question is but I think it is great! :-) Only thing I would change is your hook. With the hook you want something strong to grab the readers attention. Example: Would you stay out late just to suffer many consequences? (Sometjing like that) Try to use something to really make the reader think about your topic!
I have found a PDF. file that will help you out with the outlining! I have attached it to this reply.
The answer here is 3. Diction