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I love going to the zoo with my dad. Many of the animals are cool and we like looking at animals especially lions. <u>because</u> (lions are big and strong and strong animals are scary) (Change : They are tough and ferocious, which makes them scary)<u> </u><u>in real life</u> but when they are in a cage it isn't so bad. <u>but</u> I would never want to be put in a cage because I would get sad. <u>so</u> (I don't know if the animals are happy or sad but) (change : Uncertain if the animals will feel happy or sad themselves) my dad (says)(change : said) that the animals at the zoo are very well taken care of and i shouldn't worry about them.
Explanation:
I added brackets to the parts where i changed the sentenced, underlined the parts I would cross out and bold the periods.
Where it says change : don't add that in the sentence.
Answer:
The third one would be your best choice and the answer.
Explanation:
BRAINLIEST ANSWER PLEASE????
Answer:
Brandon enthusiastically told Sara, that the play was incredible.
Explanation:
This is incorrect because a comma is used to separate clauses or two main ideas. In this case, that is not true. The sentence should not contain a comma since the sentence is one idea.
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<span>To ask how much longer the professor will live is to ask how much longer we must wait for the blessings of another world war.
"blessings" being the key word, because a world war would not bring blessings, but devastation. </span>
The ox is a domestic animal