She looks down upon it.
In _A Raisin in the Sun_ by Lorraine Hansberry, Walter
Younger has a plan to open up a liquor store.
Normally, a parent would support a child’s ambitions, but in the
instance of Walter Younger this is not the case. His mother Lena Younger opposes his opening
of a liquor store because she is morally opposed to the drinking of alcohol and
looks down upon it and what it can lead to.
Answer:
Put a period after: later on got called "The Shot".
Where you say "Another reason is if your watching" - the your is you're
Get rid of "could" in your last sentence. it will make you seem more confident.
Explanation:
It looks good otherwise!
Answer:
we filled bottles and canteens with water - visual imagery
compares typhoons to a great big circus for the kids - simile
the morning to storm doors - visual/ Auditory imagery