Question

Got another POEM for you guys, please tell me what I can fix or what you liked best or stuck out to you once again it will not hurt my feelings.. It is called Always Smile.
Always smile
At least that’s what everyone says
But why smile when you feel in denial
Honest I can smile but when I do
I feel that nothing is changed and happiness is never arranged
The funny thing is I don’t feel sad either
It’s like someone shot a bullet through my emotions
Because I feel nothing no pain
And no happiness
I am just a person with no emotions
How did I even get this way
Now there’s a lot of commotions
But I have no emotions
So what am I suppose to do
Sure you could get the bullet out
But it won’t help me inside and out
Even if you stick by my side
Just give it some time
You’ll shoot me again
I know you lied
You never be my die or ride
And that’s why you not even my side

Answer 1

I really like it! As a person who also writes poetry it’s really good! I just have a one thing that I would personally change but it’s totally up to you. I would say “at least that’s what they say” instead of everyone says. But other than that’s it’s beautiful and accurate.

Answer 2

Bro I love this- I- :D