Schaffer mistakenly told his assistant to strike alarm Box 342, and as a result, firefighters were directed to an incorrect location during the Chicago fire of 1871.
This is the best example of adding concrete details. It specifically says which alarm box Schaffer told his assistant. The original sentence makes it seem as the miscommunication was the big problem. While it was a problem, the fact that the firefighters went to the incorrect location is really the reason the Chicago fire of 1871 was so devastating. Including these details makes the writing much clearer and easier for the reader to follow.
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B : They are the same words as reflexive pronouns but used differently.
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I think it may be C. Objects can give people power
<span>"So-called anonymous tracking is not very secure—the anonymity is fairly easily broken. Cracking [it]...is a fairly easy engineering feat."
This example maintains the main idea of the passage, keeping its message in tact while eliminating information using ellipses to improve clarity. The addition of "it" also helps make it clearer and more concise. </span>
