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Example of a sentence that most needs to be revised because it's description is too vague is : we hike two miles uphill in the blooming forest.
Usually, you hike on the mountain not in the blooming forest.
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Answer:
The main theme of the story "An occurrence at Owl Creek Bridge" is the inevitable and fluid passing of time. No matter what one does, one cannot escape death as time claims all eventually.
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The correct answer is
A: The United States will not behave unethically after the battle.