She met her friends in the lobby, the bottom floor, of the hotel so that they could head over to the refreshing pool for a cool,

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Delvig [45]

3 years ago

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She met her friends in the lobby, the bottom floor, of the hotel so that they could head over to the refreshing pool for a cool,

brisk swim.
Which is the best revision of this sentence?

English

2 answers:

nadya68 [22] · Answer 1 · 2022-07-13T22:49:58+03:00

nadya68 [22]3 years ago

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<u>A. She met her friends in the lobby of the hotel, and they headed over to the pool for a cool, refreshing swim.</u> This sentence is the best revision that tells all necessary details.

Alexus [3.1K] · Answer 2 · 2022-07-13T23:54:49+03:00

Answer:

She met her friends at the hotel’s bottom floor, which is the lobby, so that they could head over to the swimming pool for a cool, brisk swim.

Explanation:

Hotel being a location, it is okay to use 's as possession instead of <em>"of"</em>. In this phrase, it is much clearer that the bottom floor is the floor in which the lobby is. Also, the phrase gets a better flow with the correctly placed commas.