The correct answer is going on a first date.
This Gary Soto’s poem, <em>Oranges</em>, describes the feelings of a boy going on a first date, most probably, for the first time in his life. That is the reason why we can say that the poem depicts a rite of passage, because this was a significant turning point in his life.
The first date is described as the first time he walked with a girl. He picks her up. She is wearing make-up. The physical contact between them is shy and gentle and he leds her down the street. He invites her a chocolate bar and the poet keeps on describing his thoughts an feelings to vividly recreate that passage from being a naive boy to a hormonal teenager.
I wish i had about $200 in my pocket
Revising
prewriting is just getting basic ideas down/planning
drafting is turning those ideas into sentences and paragraphs making your rough draft
editing is major changes such as rearranging, adding, or deleting sentences
revising is small changes such as grammar or spelling
