Question

Will someone edit my paper for me im not good at edditing

Answer 1

In the third paragraph I think you should change your first sentence to "Not everyone learns the same way. Understanding you cant force someone to learn a specific way is the key to helping many kids. Learning is necessary to set us up for the real world, but the real world isent forcing you to do something you cant. " I think having a shorter topic sentence makes it easier to understand. You do not have to agree with my constructive critism, but I think listening to it will make your writing better