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DIA [1.3K]
3 years ago
9

Read the following short excerpt of student writing. Use your vocabulary and grammar knowledge to determine which suggestions yo

u would make to improve his or her grammar and word choice.
I really thought she loved me but I discovered her grave betrayal one afternoon. It was easy to figure out because she accidentally sent a text to me that was meant for him. I was confused by the text because it said, "Don't tell Mike." I felt insulted that she thought she could get away with this infidelity. At first I felt very angry bitter and hateful but then, I felt so hopeless and depressed. I longed for her to call me. I thought if I could just hear her pleasing voice, maybe then I would not be filled with such bitterness. Instead of calling her I talked to another friend who is good at listening and feeling my pain. Talking with her makes me feel euphoric. I think I may be on the road to recovery.

Which punctuation correction would improve the following sentence?

 Insert a comma after "friend." 
Insert a period after "friend." 
Insert a comma after "her."
 Insert a comma after "listening."
English
1 answer:
vodka [1.7K]3 years ago
3 0

Insert a comma after her!

hope this helps

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