Read the sentence.
Walking can be a form of exercise just as effective as running as far as health benefits and might even be a better option for some people with certain health problems.
Which revision corrects the wordiness and redundancy in this sentence?
For certain people, walking can be a better form of exercise than running if you have certain health conditions.
Certain health problems that some people might have make walking better than running because they can get the same health benefits.
Walking has many of the same health benefits as running and might be a better option for people with certain health conditions.
Walking can be just as effective as running and maybe even better for certain people with certain health problems
Answer:
Walking can be just as effective as running and maybe even better for certain people with certain health problems
Explanation:
According to the given sentence, the speaker is trying to convey the idea that walking can be an effective form of exercise that can be used in place of running for some people with certain health conditions.
Therefore, the revision that corrects the wordiness and redundancy in this sentence is option D. This is because, it goes straight to the point without unnecessary repetition which causes wordiness and eliminates redundancy.
That depends on the college she is going, who is giving the scholarship and the reason why she is leaving. Scholarships, have nothing to do with when you use it... usually. For example, if the person/company/association giving the scholarship said they would give her the scholarship for her las year of college they have to give it to her for that last year doesn't matter if it took one more year to get to that last one or if she got promoted one year above the one she was supposed to be they have to give it to her one year earlier, but it has to be the last year.
So no, it doesn't matter if she takes a year off, she still has her scholarship she just needs a document that says she is taking a year off and why and turn it in to whoever is giving the scholarship.
Answer:
I would say provide
Explanation:
they support and provide more information
