I don’t think you need a comma after old
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the concluding statement is just a simple one sentence ending. for this, for example, I would put "In conclusion, *state your claim/topic sentence*, because of *state evidence(usually the 3 main points, one word phrases*."
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hope this helps! if you need more help just ask. and don't stress too much about it! it's only one sentence:)
You are your freind is absolutely right
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one is "Don't mess this up for me, OK, Scrooge?" because this is relating to Dickens's A Christmas Carol and another would be "Alright, Romeo" because this is alluding to Shakespeare's Romeo and Juliet.
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An Allusion-an expression designed to call something to mind without mentioning it explicitly; an indirect or passing reference.
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