Looks Great! A few critiques...
In paragraph 1 i think you spelled socialize wrong.
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if so, try using this to write you essays next time...
K-key idea
E- evidence -1
A- analyze evidence( give your thoughts
T-transition-( i.e.- Continuing on,
E- Evidence -2
A- analyze evidence
L- link the paragraph all together
it really helps to keep everything organized and consistent. For your introduction, try using a hook, a bridge , and finally a thesis. A thesis should ALWAYS be the last sentence in your intro paragraph.
For your conclusion start of with your thesis, go into your Main ideas of the essay, and then give something for the reader to think about (clincher)
Hopefully this helped!!
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The answer would be D. You can immediately eliminate both B and C because it does not apply to both stories at once. You can also eliminate A because according to both myths, saintly beings protect the earth, not evil ones. Therefore, the only answer is D.
You might have heard the words “sharing is caring” so here’s why we say that. Let’s say one day someone asks you to share your chips and you say no. That person obviously doesn’t like it. Well next time that person has something and of course you would want some. But that person wouldn’t want to share because you didn’t share. Sharing also means you care about someone. That’s where the term comes from.
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Everyone in the class <u>opens</u> a new computer file.