Question

Can someone proofread my paragraph real quick just to make sure it doesn't sound dumb.

Answer 1

Answer:

i like it. its something people need to understand because theres a diffrence. i t makes sense to me so im pretty sure whoever your sending it to will understand it. good stuff dude

Explanation:

Answer 2

Answer:

People like to make the argument that graffiti makes some places look unsafe, ugly, and unsettling. People like to think in this way because when people think of graffiti they think about taggers. These people like to represent gangs, and when slurs are written on the wall they think that because graffiti artists and taggers have similar methods and get confused and just judge a book by its cover when going to places with a lot of graffiti on the walls.

Explanation:

Looks pretty good, but I corrected a few minor errors!