Answer:
Please review our suggestion for paving over the muddy area where students wait before school.
Explanation:
This revision is the most formal and respectful. The second one is very forward and informal, the third one uses too many adjectives like awesome, which is not formal. The last one sounds okay until they use obviously, which is very forward and disrespectful.
P = the number of photos added is independent.
t = the thickness of the scrapbook is dependent.
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Answer: To make an essay on a place you visited you need to have a topic sentence to grab the reader's attention. So for example, you can say "This essay will be about my epic and fun adventure to New York City. Then for your first paragraph tell the reader how you got to your destination and what you saw along the way. Also in you first paragraph, you can talk about how long it took to get to your destination.
Then for your second paragraph, talk about what you did when you got to your destination. For example, the first thing that I did was go out to a fancy restaurant to eat. Or, the first thing I did was go to the bathroom because of my long drive.
Now for your last detail paragraph tell the reader what the last thing you did before leaving and how fun it was and all the cool things you saw.
And now for your inclonclusion wrap up everything you said, for example that was all about my epic trip to...........
Walt Whitman experience slavery first hand at a slave market in New Orleans.