13. Why (wasn't, weren't) you at the scout meeting yesterday

You are visiting your Grandmother and notice that she is eating a balanced diet, taking vitamins, getting the proper amount of s

kirill115 [55]

I have 2 different one's you can choose from if you like them that is.

Dear Grandma,

There are so many things that I could say about you, and none of them would do you any justice. You’re the most incredible human being ever. I will never be able to fully put into words how much you mean to me, but I can go on for the rest of my life trying.

I visited you last time and noticed that you are eating a balanced diet, taking vitamins, getting the proper amount of sleep and not overweight. Despite your healthy lifestyle, you appeared run down and tired. I realized that it's due to your lack of physical activity.

Keeping up your healthy fashion conjointly means that maintaining physical exertion. Exercise helps manage your weight. It helps maintain it or helps you lose weight. despite the fact that having a healthy fashion, exercise conjointly helps battle the possibility of obtaining diseases and different sicknesses. Exercise will facilitate improve your energy state, similarly as ensuring you get the correct quantity of sleep. And besides these, exercise will cause you to feel nice normally, and facilitate improved your overall mood.

I love you so much.

Yours forever,

Your favorite grandchild

or this one

Dear Grandmother,

I saw you eating a balanced diet and also taking all the health beneficiary but still, you feel tired and down and maybe that is because of missing Physical activity from your daily routine.

As you very well know a balanced diet is important for health the same as physical activity is also important for good health without the combination of a balanced diet and physical activity we can not become completely healthy and always end up getting tired.

There are so many benefits of physical activity such as,

decrease your chance of a heart attack.

maintain your weight better.

have a weaker blood cholesterol level.

reduce the chance of a variety of diabetes and some cancers,

So I request you to start doing physical activity from tomorrow onward.

Your grandson

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2 years ago

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Rewrite the sentence by correcting the faulty parallelism, misplaced modifier, squinting modifier, or dangling modifier.

Alekssandra [29.7K]

Answer and explanation:

1) Twisting the valve tightly shut, the fire hydrant stopped spewing water into the street.

There is a dangling modifier, "Twisting the valve tightly shut." We do not know who was twisting the valve shut, and it certainly wouldn't make sense for it to be the fire hydrant. To correct it, we could add the missing information:

1) After the fireman had twisted the valve tightly shut, the fire hydrant stopped spewing water into the street.

2) We enjoyed his company because of his stories and how he told them.

There is faulty parallelism in this sentence since the two things that come after "because" do not present the same grammatical structure. To correct it, we need to change one of the two things to make it "similar" to the other:

2) We enjoyed his company because of how interesting his stories were and how he told them.

3) While playing basketball in the driveway, my ball was punctured by a cactus.

Another dangling modifier here, "While playing basketball in the driveway." We can assume I was the one playing, since the ball is said to be mine. But that isn't at all clear in the sentence. Let's correct it:

3) While I was playing basketball in the driveway, my ball was punctured by a cactus.

4)The rescue team almost arrived too late.

We have a squinting modifier, an adverb that is placed at a strange position. Did the rescue team arrive or not? Did they arrive but too late? "Almost" should be placed somewhere else to make it clear whether the team arrived.

4)The rescue team arrived almost too late.

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3 years ago

Which jobs did mark twain hold during his lifetime?

pickupchik [31]

Typesetter to river pilot, prospector, newspaper reporter, lecturer, author, publisher, businessman and family man.

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3 years ago

“Let this pernicious hour Stand aye accursed in the calendar!” What does pernicious mean?

olganol [36]

Pernicious means Wicked; Harmful

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