You forgot to add a coma after the pause. <span>One Heartless Soul,another Pure.</span>
I think it’s the first and the last because it’s 4 standards and those give you two each but I’m not sure
You begin with the largest to the smallest. First revise the overall structure. make sure you have introductory paragraph, followed by supporting paragraphs. then summary and closing paragraphs.
After the paragraphs are correct then you can go in and revise sentences that do not belong. either reword or remove.
The final step is the words. making sure they are spelled and used correctly
Because she feels l8ke she will never be able to get away from her sister
and that she is the reason that she just is not able to get hopes up that she will
