A passive voice is whenever you make the object of an action the subject of the sentence you are writing. (Ex: Why was the road crossed by the chicken?)
An active voice is whenever you make the subject of the sentence doing the verb's action. (Ex: The chicken crossed the road.)
I would suggest working on word choice, since you used the same words many times in the essay.
That is the answer. :)
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90 Aba Owerri Road,
Umungasi,
Aba.
November 17, 2020.
Dear Chichi,
I am so pleased to hear that you recently gained admission into Rockview High School. This achievement bears witness to the fact that you have been a hardworking student. Rockview High School is known to have the strictest selection process for admission of new students into highschool. I congratulate you once more on this achievement!
My years as a student at Rockview High School were very rewarding. I can boldly say that Rockview High school teachers laid the foundation upon which I am now building my life. Rockview is a citadel of moral and academic formation where young teenagers are prepared to undertake diverse life endeavors.
Chichi, every achievement in life comes with responsibilities. You have to take responsibility while in school. Remember that none of us will be there to guide you into the right choices but you have your conscience as your guide. Do not associate with people who do not uphold the system of values that you have learnt at home. Do not lower your moral standard in order to accommodate friends who think that mischief making is fun. Remember to hold up your head high even when you are left alone with your convictions. Always bear in mind the injunction of the Holy Bible; "Do not follow a multitude to do evil". Let this be your watchword.
Lastly, remember that good grades have never fallen on anybody like ripe cherries from a tree. You have to work hard and stay focused. Remember that your final GPA is very important when you begin to seek admission into college after high school.
A word is enough for the wise. Remember to stay safe always and obey all corona virus safety protocols while in school.
Yours Sincerely,
Jude
