Answer:
when you build suspence you want to leave the reader on a cliff or rather leave them asking themselves questions like, oh my gosh is he going to die
you can take the readers thoughts and incorperate them into the passage such as
¨i fell into the water, struggling to get back up, i cant swim, i start flailing my arms underwater and trying to go up to the surface, i look down and my pants are caught on the bottom of the boats rack, help me is all i can think i stop flailing knowing im going to die,..¨
then thats the susspence which is where you caan take the story and go many different ways
hope this helped! :)
Explanation:
The second conflict is that Jacob must decide whether he should stay with Miss Peregrine and his new friends in the loop hole, or stay in the present-day with his family. He knows that if he stays with his family he will live in fear for the rest of his life. He also knows that he may end up like his grandfather if he continues in the real world. However, he also knows that he would miss his family if he went to live with Miss Peregrine. But, he can not bear to think about life without Emma. Jacob must make a decision that will have a huge impact on his life. This conflict is man v. self.
34,258 is less then 47,163.
