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zhuklara [117]
3 years ago
8

How is the following sentence improved by the revision?

English
1 answer:
Verdich [7]3 years ago
5 0

Answer:

4. removes passive voice and correctly places modifier

Explanation:

The given sentence is improved by the revision by removing the passive voice and correctly places modifier.

From the original and revised sentences, "Hester was judged by the community for her sin" is changed to "The community judged Hester for her sin" which turns the passive voice to active voice and places the modifier correctly.

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