The original gives vivid details, while the seconded one does not. The first one (the original) describes senses and that helps you visualize. In the seconded one they removed all of the describing details making it harder to visualize.
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i really dont lnw what this pls tell me n psychology and cognitive science, a schema describes a pattern of thought or behavior that organizes categories of information and the relationships among them.