You need a thesis statement in your intro paragraph. "Even" in the first sentence is capitalized even though it is after a comma. Rather than just giving background, try to relate the background info to examples in the novel.
Answer:
From the first 10 lines, the structures and the choice of words actually sounds and resembles like that of a teenage girl. Annie John´s way of speaking usually showed her feelings, opinions and her young personality. With the way the words are structured, it seem to belong to a well-educated teenager.
Explanation:
From the excerpt, Annie John choice of words revealed that she is a teenage girl. When she was about to leave Antigua, she began to remember the time her dad took her out. Also, she showed that she never wanted to leave her parents; what many kids so.
The story is narrated by Annie John who is 17 years old, and was about leaving Antigua to go to England in order to become a nurse. On her bed before the night of her departure, she thinks back over her life. Also, she thought about her the distant relationship to her parents that will be created because she is planning never to return to Antigua.
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"Everything that was said to me I seemed to have heard before, and I could no longer listen. I could no longer sit in little bars near Grand Central and listen to someone complaining of his wife’s inability to cope with the help while he missed another train to Connecticut."
