<span>daydreaming because when you are day dreaming you are off in another place</span>
Hi! you need to find his phrases and and maybe change them to his perspective? like “my dream job” would wither be “his dream job” or instead about saying elijah as YOU were talking about him then change it to HIS perspective like “ I went to an interview for MY dream job” does that make sense lol?
Common Sense helped persuade American colonists that they could successfully wage a war for their independence.
This is a strong concluding sentence because it takes some of the information from the beginning of the paragraph and wraps it up nicely in a way that is clear and concise.
The correct way to say that sentence would be to put "everyone's innocence"
