I agree with you.
I'd also say that a poem using theoretical or obscure terms to convey meaning may be said to be using abstract diction.
Since these terms are not concrete, they are abstract.
Hello!
A proper way to revise this sentence is:
"I have read that the huge city of Tokyo, the capital of Japan, has over 30 million people."
I hope this helps you! Have a great day!
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I am currently beginning my track years l towards a half marathon and have my first long run tomorrow (5 miles) ...tips.... get a good tracking app, eat good food, drink lots of water, give it a few weeks. I know it hurts, but it will get better... try to pace yourself
