The biggest issue with this is that the first sentence is run-on, you should consider breaking it into smaller sentences, maybe by getting rid of the "and" after describing the mother, replacing it with a period and letting the father get a sentence of his own. Also, you could try "-on how happy the Railway family is. The story also uses detail on how nice the parents are-" something along those lines, just to break the run-on sentence?
This is minor, but at the end "creates a sense of perfection, by describing their house-" the comma before by isn't necessary, and can either be deleted, or you can rephrase like "a sense of perfection. The story does this by describing-"
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The correct answer should be Should this land be used to build a library?
The land belongs to the country, and the government has to decide what to do with that land, because it is its property.
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This is only 165 words, but I got brain dead. Hopefully you can string along some more ideas/answers, but heres what I've got. Sorry if it wasn't enough :(
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The advantages and disadvantages of staying in contact with your parents/guardians as a teenager.
There are many advantages and disadvantages when it comes to staying in contact with a parent as a teen. When you're a teen you need space, as you're going through hormones or just need space because of school. There can always be strict parents, disallowing you to see friends or other parts of the family. Parents can shame you and make you feel bad about things you really shouldn't feel bad about.
But keeping contact isn't always bad, we have parents to help out needs and keep us safe until we can finally leave off to college or start our own life. Your parents also pay for the majority of your things. Parents pay for your food, shelter, and even the phone in your pocket.
Parents can both have pros and cons whenever it comes to keeping contact with them, but none the less we should try and be thankful.
Change killer’s to killers
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In my opinion I think it's A but if you would include the evidence, that will help me a lot
