C. The author uses a simile to compare the feeling of nervousness to melting because the sentence uses the word "like," which is an underlying hint to similes. Without it, it would be a metaphor.
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Daisy is pursued Gatsby is pursuing, Tom and Daisy are tired.
1. change they're to their
2. change an a
3. delete the comma after workhouse
4. add a comma after computer
5. change too to to