Ok im sorry for you :( hope you feel better
The speaker seems to not be too pleased with the characteristics of the woman he is describing. He's saying her eyes are dull compared to the brightness of the sun, her lips are drab and have no color compared to red coral, her breasts are dun, her hair looks like wires coming out of her head, her breath stinks and that her cheeks have no color and are plain. I suppose in spite of all that he finds unpleasant about her, he still loves her and thinks she is rare and valuable.
Semicolons should not be used between a dependent clause and an independent clause.
Laughing can relieve muscle tension and stress. Laughing also causes your brain to release hormones like endorphins. It also decreases stress hormones, which is a big help. When you laugh you also take deep breaths, so you end up getting more oxygen in our blood stream. Laughing can also improve your immune system, so you can fight off infections better. Try to expand on that. Hope that helps.
