Dear Diary,
October 31st, 1658
On this very day, I survived a kraken attack. We were on our ship, and we had to bring ammunition's to other country's. T was very stormy on he high seas, but we managed. Later in the trip I saw something in the water, like a tentacle? I warned that captain but he ignored it. Eventually we heard a loud boom from underneath the ship, water started to get in! The captain shouted " Kraken!" Everyone started to panic. I decided to grab a spear, gather some spar wood and rope; to make a raft. The I'd use the spear to stab the kraken in the eye on my way to safety. I tied the last rope, and made my way toward the kraken.......
I made it to the kraken, i very slowly and carefully stabbed the kraken! She let out a huge roar before smashing the ship to pieces! I was very lucky to have gotten away.
Answer:
Re: instructor
Subject: Exam Grade.
Dear instructor,
I am contacting you to discuss my exam grade. I am really stumped with the grade I received and would like to know the reason why my rating was 0.
I have really worked very hard to take this exam and was expecting a higher grade. That is why I need to know what has gone wrong with my answers so that I can improve or perhaps do a review in case it was a mistake in the correction.
Greetings you sincerely,
Terry.
Explanation:
At first look, we can see that Terry is writing an email that is too informal, without a structure and with a language that is not appropriate for the person who is going to receive it.
Therefore, what must be improved in this email is its structure, its language and the way in which it is expressed towards a superior.
The way to write a formal email correctly is as follows:
- Think carefully about the subject of the message
- Make a timeless greeting adapted to the recipient
- Synthesize the content to the maximum
- Don't forget to say goodbye
- Sign the mail
- Before hitting 'send', check your message
Answer:
The first author indicates that zoos create habitats that resemble animals’ homes in the wild, while the second author believes that zoos cannot meet animals’ needs for climate and space.
Explanation:
that is the one I think it is.
Answer:third person omniscient
Explanation:tells what is happening without character dialogue
OK what are the ten questions?